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Joon

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A mobile game that teaches kids to build good habits

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Joon is a mobile game that motivates kids to do tasks that they might not otherwise want to do—things like chores, homework, brushing their teeth, or making their bed—or things which they like, but not always in the moment—calling a grandparent, for example.

Short excerpt from the founders’ Launch HN post. Read the full original at the link below.

Read the launch post on Hacker News Company website

Posted 2022-01-19 · 54 points · 59 comments. Batch as stated by the founders in the post title.

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